What you have to say here is quite profound. And also, said in such a heartfelt beautiful way. I enjoyed all of your poetry ---- your first one is such a classic! Like I want to embroider it on a pillow and give it to you for your living room to see and remind you ---- of you! But the second poem about the butterflies ---- that last line floored me. Like I could literally feel my heart drop.
Okay, and now for some unsolicited advice, so remember, FWIW: I think you should do these with video and start a YouTube channel. Seriously. I've been reading up about it all, and it seems to me that it might be ideal for you. It might take 3 years to take off, but heck, you're going to live through the next 3 years anyway, so go for it! Also, I would love to see a copy of the poems you read in print, so I can follow you. Your telling of the poems is pure art, and I'd like to be able to read them, see and hear them, some of them over and over again. Keep writing.
What you have to say here is quite profound. And also, said in such a heartfelt beautiful way. I enjoyed all of your poetry ---- your first one is such a classic! Like I want to embroider it on a pillow and give it to you for your living room to see and remind you ---- of you! But the second poem about the butterflies ---- that last line floored me. Like I could literally feel my heart drop.
Okay, and now for some unsolicited advice, so remember, FWIW: I think you should do these with video and start a YouTube channel. Seriously. I've been reading up about it all, and it seems to me that it might be ideal for you. It might take 3 years to take off, but heck, you're going to live through the next 3 years anyway, so go for it! Also, I would love to see a copy of the poems you read in print, so I can follow you. Your telling of the poems is pure art, and I'd like to be able to read them, see and hear them, some of them over and over again. Keep writing.
I added the text of each poem, for you. :-) You should be able to scroll and see each poem in the post now.
And I will keep thinking about it! I know I probably should.
great 👍👍👍